just recently made a poem , i just need ur comments ^^, any violent reactions
sa poems ....
Oct 10 , 2010
i thought it was for real,
coz that's what i think we feel,
but i realise im such a fool
since the day in my heart i let you rule.
why you have to say you love me,
if you really wont?
why you need to pretend you care,
if you really dont?
i put my love and trust in you
coz i thought you are true
but now you left here
all alone only with tears.
i gave my whole heart to you
while hoping that our dreams will come true
because of all the promises you made
that you left with me to fade.
but i still thank you for all the things you do
coz i learned a lot of things too,
to cry,to stand,to smile,to fight
and turned my life into something new.


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